Hi Mr. I Love You!

Hi Mr. I Love You!

A Poem by Cassie
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Sometimes you're paper and pen will be the one who'll listen to you.

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10/10/12

 

Hi Mr. I love you!

You’re kindness and sweetness

Made me love you more and more

You’re like a mushroom everywhere that I go I always saw you

As I slept you’re in my dreams! Making me happy

 

 

But in reality? You’re like a gravity that pulls me down

Huhuhu I cried again because of you Mr.

I want to scream and shout to tell you that

I love you but I’m like a tree stuck with its own place

 

 

Scared to know the truth because I know

You won’t love me back as I do Mr.

So I guess I have to forget everything I’ll put it in a box

A box that will burn into ashes Mr.

 

 

Like my love for you I knew its hard but I’ll do it

Just to save the friendship that we still have

For our own good I wish you’ll be happy

I guess this is a good bye take care always

 

 

Don’t forget that a girl loved you once

 I never thought I’ll come up to this point Mr.

Felt horrible sad? But the same time I’m Happy

I’m glad that I’ve made it to the end

I thought I’ll die if I loss you but....

© 2013 Cassie


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What a wonderful piece. Losing love is hard and you captured the emotion so well in this poem :) You are an amazing writer. So impressed!

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

Thank you! =))
This poem is lovely and very relate-able, with a familiar voice that reminds me far too much of that in my head :P You did a very good job, keep it up! :)


Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

Thanks! I wrote this way back high school. =)
A peace about longing and it was very sweet :) enjoyed it .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

Thank you so much! :)
Is this some sort of connected with your poem "I'm Broken"? lol

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

No Nathan! Hahaha.
I love how you are addressing "Mr."

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

Thanks Zach!
There is a love to be kept
and one to be left.

There's a song your heart sings
while you ignore the bell that rings

Love doesn't mean to be always a sunny day
When it rain, you can also come out and play

But one thing I shall impart
Your head is above your heart

Now you know what I mean
It's from where I have been...


Posted 6 Years Ago


Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Why, do I look like a foreigner? LOL. I have sent a request already. Please accept if you want to me.. read more
Cassie

6 Years Ago

Sort of! Hahaha. I accepted it already.
Margaux  (Dhaye)

6 Years Ago

Ahaha! I'm not flattered...I'm used to it. LOL.
Are you love? Because they say "love is blind.. read more
This is quite good Cassie . How come you only have one poem composed yet you have written a book ? Just curiously asking .

Posted 6 Years Ago


Cassie

6 Years Ago

Thanks for reading Neil! Well poetry I think isn't for me but I have tons of poem but I rather kept .. read more
NeiL ArandA

6 Years Ago

That's awesome then ...No problem ...

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Cassie

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