Just Give Out

Just Give Out

A Poem by C_theSurrealist
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Don't give in...

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As we run to the peak,
expect the scars will appear
the blood will shed deep
our eyes will covered with fear
in the latter, mist comes
mountains will be valleys
it's the abyss where it stands,
bridge to goal wouldn't unleash.

Rain can desolate everything,
clouds can steal the sun
yet will you just let it?
Even you are giving out,
emotionally or physically,
you shouldn't never utter,
" give in, give up."
Cause the light will shine,
No one knows when
Just wait.
It'll be the cloud nine,
the heaven
as your journey continues...
                       

© 2017 C_theSurrealist


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your're comparing the differences between mountains and valleys. good work. keep writing

Posted 6 Years Ago



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Added on May 20, 2017
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C_theSurrealist
C_theSurrealist

Philippines



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undisputed surrealist of artistry // a mathematician of beauty and algebraist of poetry // painter of the universe // soon to be a well-renowned engineer in the field of chemistry // ambitious and sub.. more..

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