MIGRAINE OF LIFE

MIGRAINE OF LIFE

A Poem by Crusaderscross

Sometimes I think, then
my head aches
Green pills close, but none taken

Sometimes I think, then
nothing happens
My head still aches

The wall is close, BANG!!!!
I am on the floor
My head still aches

I start to think (take the pill)
Gun goes off,
nothing happens

My head still aches

I drink a beer


© 2010 Crusaderscross


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"I start to think (take the pill)
Gun goes off,
nothing happens"
I'm a little lost here. Just curious where the gun came in. Had it been in hand, or is it just a metaphor type thing.
Other than that, this was a good read. I really like the first verse. Being prone to migraines myself, I always wait until I can't stand the thumping any longer before taking my medicine. I also like the second verse too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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"I start to think (take the pill)
Gun goes off,
nothing happens"
I'm a little lost here. Just curious where the gun came in. Had it been in hand, or is it just a metaphor type thing.
Other than that, this was a good read. I really like the first verse. Being prone to migraines myself, I always wait until I can't stand the thumping any longer before taking my medicine. I also like the second verse too.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

... Wow, nice poem... what a painful poem, very well written too...
Favorite lines:
"I start to think (take the pill)
Gun goes off,
Nothing happens"
I'm not quite sure what's going on, but it sounds interesting, very interesting. I think it could use just a bit more details though...
"I drink a beer"
What a way to cure a headache.... lol, nicely written. :D

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Crusaderscross
Crusaderscross

Montreal, Canada



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