A SOLDIERS DREAM

A SOLDIERS DREAM

A Poem by Crusaderscross

The calm feeling of hate
Trembling passion of man
Pools of dripping blood
War is the nature of the beast

The sound of death is everywhere,
marching closer and closer searching for the weak
It remains anonymous,
until the days first sunlight

Physical memories disappear in a cloud of noise
Confusion comes with no explanation
Everything that is beautiful awaits its faith

A sky filled with piercing lights
A paralyzing feeling of hope is born
Unaware of the hunt,
the time to strike has come

Loud thundering metallic voices deafen life
Everything goes black
Nothing remains, except
a small picture showing nothing but a single growing poppy



© 2010 Crusaderscross


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That was amazing... Truly amazing... I loved it... The way it was written, the way it was you moved the reader... it was just simply beautiful...
Favorite lines:
"The sound of death everywhere
Marching closer and closed searching for the weak "
Amazing yet terrifying feeling...
"Confusion comes with no explanation"
I'd ate to feel so lost, and just reading this, made me feel that way... Bravo
"Loud thundering metallic voices deafen life
Everything goes black"
Amazing... I love it! :)

Posted 9 Years Ago



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Added on July 27, 2010
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Crusaderscross
Crusaderscross

Montreal, Canada



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