Summer

Summer time,

                   You feel good , wake up earlier

                   Fellas having bbq's and ladies turn their hair more curlier 

Days are longer and easy to remember 

                                   no December

                              just hot & tender

Where life gives you duality 

its up to you to put it into a     blender 

night time, is the right time

                                      for a family dinner, those dearest to you

                                      just to escape the city lights and get lost in the atmosphere of  the night's presence

                                      to catch a baseball game with crew while drinking some brews. 

                                      to get your lover and show that no other human being is equivalent to the beauty                                                         you are seeing

                                                                  Uhuh

Author's Note

this one was well thought out.

Reviews

[Einstein Noodle]

oh yeah! you it all the right spots. already missing summer as we seem to be easing into fall.
E.

[Nia Hope]

Awesome poem. You totally captured the meaning of summer. :)

[Tom]

You've talent my fello, this was charming and as you say a lot of thought went into this poem and the outcome was well worth the effort!

A little gem of a write here ! Bravo!

[Joyce S. Greene]

I empathize with your happiness and pleasure during the warm days of summer, Jason. (Winter will soon be upon us - bah, humbug!) Very nice.

[Lexi Richard]

Beautifully written, I enjoyed this a lot.

[Schyala]

Another incredible poem! The only thing i didn't really understand was the end but im sure it means something to you!

[NA]

Great imagery, excellent piece...really enjoyed

[TL Boehm]

Yes, summer - this poem is a wonderful reminder of what summer should be.

[carol burgess romance]

This is done realy well, it runs so smooth....great write

[Rob Funk]

Once again an exceptional piece, I too love summer. Great job!