Thought 2

Thought 2

A Poem by CRZ

The world is passing me by.

Society is just aging me and all the fears are just burning me

But

 .........If I stay young in my heart, I'll be fresh for an eternity 

© 2013 CRZ


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True words! So simple yet deep and meaningful.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I really like this! Nice job!

Posted 10 Years Ago


well done statement...nicely slim and 2 the point...it's best 2 stay young at heart

Posted 10 Years Ago


absolutely right words :) aging is only for body.not for heart and soul.....cz love breaths there:)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Yes Jason - nurture the fire of youth in your heart my friend, never let it go out. The days are much longer when you're young at heart.
Cool write my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


great thoughts the world is passing by just blink and its gone

Posted 10 Years Ago


It seems the effects are accelerated each day that waves goodbye. Nice thoughts my friend.

Posted 10 Years Ago


A great philosophy if you can hang on to it. The trouble is getting the burning to stop and society to leave you alone. Succinct and well expressed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Absolutely. Well said. Energy cannot be destroyed, it can only be transformed.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Rose of many colours

10 Years Ago

You are welcome LE
That is very true my friend :-)

Posted 10 Years Ago



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CRZ
CRZ

New York, NY



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