I can Never Forgive Myself

I can Never Forgive Myself

A Poem by chris
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Sorry Bunni

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I'm so sorry for what I did

You are my whole life

i'm so disgusted

But all I can do is fight

 

It was my lifes worst mistake

I will always love you

It makes my heart ache

But now we can start new

 

I love you more than anything

Without you my life is over

Please forgive me

© 2008 chris


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good poem

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.

intriguing poem, very simple and thats what i like about it............................................. a nice write good job

Posted 12 Years Ago


This is good. I know exactly what this means, and if you have read my writing you've seen I've been through a lot of hell.
Keep it up. You have a lot of potential, so keep writing.
the more writing you add the better you get.
That's what I've done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

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Short, but nicely done. Heartfelt emotion and good rhyming.
I'm glad she forgave you too.

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

aww chris ive never seen this side of u! it kinda makes me sad but you know ill always love you! not like dana does but u kno wat i mean ^_^

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Very sweet poem. ^_^ And I like how you're able to start over and learn from your mistakes, forgiveness is always a good thing. (: Good job!

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Aww that is soo sweet! be happy that she forgave you... depending on the whole situation... I wouldn't have forgave you.... She loves you and you shouldn't take advantage of that...

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

i 4got 2 say this is a very great poem
and yes i forgive you

Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

honie bear i love you
im glad were starting new
you are my entire life too :)




Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.


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chris
chris

avon, NC



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My name is Chris Torres. I am 15 and my birthday is Novenmber 13.I live in Avon N.C.. I have two brothers a twin named Tony and a little one named David. I'm in a relatonship with Dana who I LOVE more.. more..


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