Boat trip

Boat trip

A Poem by c tung

A recount on a very human experience amidst my spiritual journey

on the boat in a storming brain
someone is sleeping but we are not
logics scream
imagination runs around
knowledge of all kinds are making a scene
sentiments put on drama
opinions speak politics
dialogues are in riots
it’s a mental fruit-tart
coated with thick thick layer of
whip feeling cream
a boat on this creamy fruit-tart storming brain
we’re seasick
you’re asleep
but you’re on the boat
say something oh Lord
something grand and powerful
something moving and charismatic
something healing and touching
something dramatically relieving
“quiet. be still.”

© 2015 c tung

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this is a thought provoking. the way in which you end it is just perfect

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c tung
c tung

Hong Kong , Hong Kong

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A Poem by c tung