A Poem by c tung

Today is my thirty two times of the first of the Eighth 
How wordy and minor my speech becomes
So particular about the unnecessary unless
there is a significant about this precise moment of time?

It is time for a forward vision 
It is time for a new chapter of life
It is time for a new light and a new passion
It is time for a new beginning 
It is time for a new season of goodness 
It is time for a new organisation 
It is time for present tense and other tenses to fall under the right grammar

Out of world in you 
Out of you in the world 
Out of world without you
Entering into the world within you 
Oh more of you please. 

© 2015 c tung

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There is somewhat a tone of desperation in the last stanza, especially in the last line.
I liked the third line in the second stanza - "It is time for a new light and a new passion"

Posted 4 Years Ago

happy birthday :) absorbing piece of writing here. Like the reshuffling nature of the last few lines :)

Posted 5 Years Ago

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Added on August 1, 2015
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c tung
c tung

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