LA LA LA LA

LA LA LA LA

A Poem by M. View
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I was at work and this lady stop to talk to me as I had my G1 open so I started this poem at that time.

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as I sit at the desk and she run her pie hole

it driven me crazy to here the yapping of her soul

some people can talk all day and night

she just can't stop the fight

of her top and bottom lip brawl

her tongue try’s to come in-between but teeth stops it all

i get through by using my imagination

by saying yeah ok you right I here what you are saying

as long as she does not ask what she said I’m good

I know you’ve been through this some one all on your hood

Where you’re ready to put your fingers in your ears and go LA LA LA LA LA……

Where you wish the next words out their mouth would be good by

Because mom taught me to be respectful

I sit their and get a f****n ear full

I guess she realized that she was talking too much

Cause as she stood up

She said “thank you for listening you are the best

I need to get all of that off my chest.

As I reply “that’s what up.”

then she replied “Most people would have said shut the f**k up”

My grandmother said some need a hand to help and shoulder to lean on if nothing else

But also an ear to listen to let them be them self…..

 

© 2009 M. View


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this is like a "mature" version of a story you would tell a little kid to teach them morals, (please dont take that in a negative way, it was a compliment)
in ways it was beautiful, the way it described a strong bond between two people,
and it was very unique in the style of writing and the voice in the poem. it makes it sound..real, original, not one of those things where ppl have a thesaurus sitting there so they can make their poem sound better.
its very honest, and i appreciate that :)
thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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All I can say about his is.. I FEEL YOU MAN.. Great write but even better content. I dig.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Truthfully said. There are just those times when we want to smack a person in their mouth and tell them to leave you alone but everyone needs someone to just listen o what they have to say. Great piece. It fit what I was feeling today. Thanks for the read request.

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Lady V

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is like a "mature" version of a story you would tell a little kid to teach them morals, (please dont take that in a negative way, it was a compliment)
in ways it was beautiful, the way it described a strong bond between two people,
and it was very unique in the style of writing and the voice in the poem. it makes it sound..real, original, not one of those things where ppl have a thesaurus sitting there so they can make their poem sound better.
its very honest, and i appreciate that :)
thanks for sharing!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Your granny is a wise lady. Sometimes we put up with things we don't like, just to help a friend in need. It's a loving thing to do, shows patience and kindness, which the World has lost so much of. A solid write!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

well.. I love it..the transitions and flow ..uniqueness loved it

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Grow up in Philadelphia but went to school in South Carolina. I have love for all types of poetry. To me it's the way to a persons soul, mind and body. Cause once it's in you it stays with you and ma.. more..

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