Buried Hope

Buried Hope

A Poem by Cynthia Man
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A poem after a long time... So, literally my first poem...

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Although flowers still blossom in spring,
Birds still hum to the mother nature,
I stand here, now alone in the dark
shadows swallowing my body,
sucking up the last bit of hope.

Darkness by my side I seek
for light from the dimness of my own
but nothing ever find  after all 
Light and justice had left me alone,
and all I remain, is  darkness after all .

No moon, no stars, loneliness overwhelming
as I have to bare the pain I deserve ,
but if light should ever be found again
could you tell me where you are,
as I will soon miss your warmness? 

How will the heat, those warming touch be?
I don't want to forget, and shall it light up,
the darkness within myself,
as I keep on waiting for the day,
stars twinkle up high again

© 2012 Cynthia Man


Author's Note

Cynthia Man
Um, the first attempt I made , I know it sucks, I know I've a lot of grammar mistakes, but I just wanna to express my feelings

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I love the way you wrote this poem. Unable to see the light above because one is buried. I love also the title. The title is widely appropriate and I see that it is well thought of.

You're poem doesn't suck, for me. I like this and find it very thought provoking

Nice write and keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the encouragement :) It means a lot to me ;D
Katherine Enma Pineapple

8 Years Ago

Glad to help and glad it means a lot. I love helping :D Stay strong



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I lovez this poem so much! XD It was really great! X3

Keep it up~ ♥
=^-^=

Posted 8 Years Ago


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K.G
:o i feel like i can relate to this. . .like. . .your all alone in a old dark well and your stuck cause no one is willing to grab your hand and to help. . . .at least thats how i feel about it. . .:3 well dont, again beautiful :3 cant wait for more

Posted 8 Years Ago


K.G

8 Years Ago

:3 music helps me with my imagination haha :3
Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Haha, I agree :))
K.G

8 Years Ago

haha yay! :3
come on.....it is damn great......the theme is just so touching and pure.i really ;liked it..and if this your first poem.i should say it's literally sublime......you have really portrayed the darkness in elegant manner .......your feelings are expressed so beautifully...the last two lines are rally heart touching..great work!!11111

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing :)
Feelings never suck, the good, the bad, the light, the dark, all still part of the whole you. With hope, faith, and love one day your light will reach down to pull you up from the darkness and envelope you with it's warming glimmer! very deep descriptions which feed our hunger. Thank you!

Jimmy

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

thanks so much for the review :)
Havoc08

8 Years Ago

you are very welcome, thank you for sharing you, you are a very refreshing person.
And a very good first one Cynthia. You've talent, and should keep writing.
You have expressed your feelings very well in this one, at least for me, it
Was almost visible. Thank you.

E.L.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

thank you so much! :D
a good story in poem
good work

Posted 8 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love the way you wrote this poem. Unable to see the light above because one is buried. I love also the title. The title is widely appropriate and I see that it is well thought of.

You're poem doesn't suck, for me. I like this and find it very thought provoking

Nice write and keep writing

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the encouragement :) It means a lot to me ;D
Katherine Enma Pineapple

8 Years Ago

Glad to help and glad it means a lot. I love helping :D Stay strong
great write love the last stanza :) keep writing

-kas

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thank you :))
Its doesnt suck. Its a story made into a poem, darkness and sorrow, but then warmth and light. Thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thanks for your review :D
hey...amazingly written....the sadness and misery..teh darkness...a feeling a hope for security and warmth...amazing..

Posted 8 Years Ago


Cynthia Man

8 Years Ago

Thank you :DD~

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