Buried Hope

A poem after a long time... So, literally my first poem...

Although flowers still blossom in spring,

Birds still hum to the mother nature,

I stand here, now alone in the dark

shadows swallowing my body,

sucking up the last bit of hope.

Darkness by my side I seek

for light from the dimness of my own

but nothing ever find  after all 

Light and justice had left me alone,

and all I remain, is  darkness after all .

No moon, no stars, loneliness overwhelming

as I have to bare the pain I deserve ,

but if light should ever be found again

could you tell me where you are,

as I will soon miss your warmness? 

How will the heat, those warming touch be?

I don't want to forget, and shall it light up,

the darkness within myself,

as I keep on waiting for the day,

stars twinkle up high again

Author's Note

Um, the first attempt I made , I know it sucks, I know I've a lot of grammar mistakes, but I just wanna to express my feelings

Reviews

[Katherine Enma Pineappl..]

I love the way you wrote this poem. Unable to see the light above because one is buried. I love also the title. The title is widely appropriate and I see that it is well thought of.

You're poem doesn't suck, for me. I like this and find it very thought provoking

Nice write and keep writing

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you for the encouragement :) It means a lot to me ;D

[Katherine Enma Pineapple]

Glad to help and glad it means a lot. I love helping :D Stay strong

[Ahmad Cox]

Thank you for yours :)

[Ahmad Cox]

I actually like it. Its actually beautiful

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for the review~

[Chuck]

Thank you for your poem, for your expression of loneliness. I like the imagery you use, the thought about life going on but your being caught in the dark. Well done.

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for the review very much :)
we all get caught in the darkness sometimes, hahaxd

[That1Nerd23]

Wow, this is absolutely wonderful! So sadly put, yet all the more powerful. You have a very depressive flow, which I like because it makes your emotion behind the words illuminate. Excellent job, Cynthia!

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for the review:D it means a lot to me, and glad you like it :D

[That1Nerd23]

You're very welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

The poem told a real story for many. Sadness and depression can blind us from the light. Wisdom comes when we learn to leave the bad stuff behind us. I did like the desire of stars at the end. Thank you for sharing the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia Man]

Thank you for your review so much :D You're right :) things always goes better when we learn how to put things aside and look at the bright side!

[Rhianne Ney]

It doesn't suck... I love it!

[Cynthia Man]

thanks :DIt means a lot to me :D

[Rhianne Ney]

Every poem and writings we do means a lot to us so keep on writing (:

[Cynthia Man]

I will :) thanks for the encouragement!

[Weeping Willow]

I like this poem, your Great at stuff like this :)

[Cynthia Man]

thanks! Its great to know someone liking it :D

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Keep expressing your feelings, and holding on to hope!

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks for your review! :D

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

I hope you will post some more.

[Cynthia Man]

I will! Btw, thanks for putting time reading this ;P It means a lot to me!

[Shimmerbliss/CAF]

Your welcome. I understand. :)

[K-mo]

I love poems that express the way you think and feel, good write!

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks a lot :D~

[K-mo]

no problem!

[Admiral Kirk]

This is really cool. It does everything it should in expressing your feelings. This is how poems should be. This poem is nostalgia, depression, regret... But this poem is hope. Great job. :D

[Cynthia Man]

Thanks :D it just I felt kinda bad at school and write it in the lesson... xd

[Admiral Kirk]

No problem. :) lol