Memories

Memories

A Poem by Cynthia

I looked at my diary,
I want to tear it,
but I know it's no use,
memories stays.

I try to forget it,
but more I want to,
the deeper I remember,
the love between us is hard.

Almost no one accepts us,
so I went away,
but it seems something stuck us,
together,
and I know what that is,
love.

Love rescued me,
and it sank me,
I am rescued,
cause of her,
I am sank,
cause of her.

I still love her,
not the her now,
but the one in my memory.

In my memory,
she's perfect,
but I know,
she's not.

So I just tink,
remember,
think of her perfect,
remembering our love,
forgetting other things,
memories perfect my life somehow.

But I am not sure will this last,
so I wait,
wait for the answer,
although the answer just give me pain,
I wait.

© 2010 Cynthia


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Good, good write. Love is messy, but can also be perfect. It's painful, but no one can control how they feel.. xx

Posted 9 Years Ago


Memories can be good and bad it's how the past was if it bad or good. I relate to this in some way.
Good Write

Dalebear

Posted 10 Years Ago


This is good. I like things dealing with memory, it fascinates me.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I like this poem too. I can relate in some way too...thanks for sharing. :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Hi Cynthia!
I really like this poem because I can relate to this. I wrote a poem similar to this one before! Great Work!

Posted 10 Years Ago


there are quite a few errors in this write . but i won't divulge into that and would rather speak about the core matter . i totally agree with you on these lines "the 'she' in my memory is perfect" .. this is the beauty of Love my dear friend . even though we are hurt , we still retain the image of our lover . you no longer love the person but still love the feeling that you had once had and the perfect 'she' was part of that enigma ! i have a write with the same title . do read in case you get time . keep writing

Posted 10 Years Ago


Nothing is ever as plain as we think......but I enjoyed the poem as it told of simplicity as best as simplicity is now a days.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Almost no one accept(s) us,so I went away,but it seems something st(u)ck us,together,and I know what(delete) that (is),Love. Love rescue(d) me, and it sank me,I am rescue(d),cause of her,I am s(u)nk,cause of her.

I was absolutely awestruck by the simplicity and beauty of this poem. It's just wonderful and perfectly portrays love that has been lost or how it can give birth or re birth your emtions or mind in some way Very well done! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


It's very intense...good job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


I just loved it.
So intensely defined your memories.
Keep writing!!!!!!!
Thanks for sharing!!!!!!!!!!!

Posted 10 Years Ago



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