Away From You- Best Way To Love You

Away From You- Best Way To Love You

A Story by Cynthia

For some reasons, I can feel what he feels. Every time he feel pain, it hurts my heart; everytime he feels happiness, I feel joy. It should be good, to feel what your lover feel, but I don't want it. Not a single bit of feeling what he feels.

Is not that Shaq isn't a good a cool guy, is because, I can't love him. I can't love him cause I love him, I can't ruin his life, I can't do anything that will hurt him, I can't.

Every time I kiss him, every time I care about him, I knew, I knew I am wrong. I knew I am wrong, I might be hurting him and...... Just not him.

I can die for Shaq, I can do anything for him. I believe he can do anything for me too, but I need to go, without a doubt. Now everything is this world stopped, I have left, I didn't leave a message, a letter, any last words, just gone.

My heart was a mess, I can feel it, I can't control my heartbeats and it was killing me, I knew he meant too much for me, that's why my heart hurts when I went away, every time I can't see him, my heart hurts.

I know I can't leave him, but the best way to love him is to leave......

© 2011 Cynthia

Author's Note

What do you think? I don't know if I do good, please tell me.
Ignore grammer for this one please, I am still working on it.

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Good Job

Posted 10 Years Ago

i love this one! & people can totally relate to what you write! Great job!!

Posted 10 Years Ago

nice!! X3 i totally got it!!
good job :)

Posted 10 Years Ago

i know exactly what you mean. i had to lie to my ex just to let him go and i ended up loosing him anyway. we're not even friends anymore. but you did i pretty good job getting your point across. so Kudos for you.^^

Posted 10 Years Ago

HA!! I don't know you're writing Love storys, hahaha!!! Anyways, it's not bad.
( I am you classmate from Yuen Yuen Primary School, LIK6!!!) LOL!

Posted 10 Years Ago

A lot of people can relate about how they don't feel worthy of their lover.

Posted 10 Years Ago

A very thought provoking and a heartfelt story sad too.

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love it! You expressed how you feel about it. It's sweet, sad, lonely. I do hope you can keep writing on it. Overall, it is great! Keep it up~

Posted 10 Years Ago

I love it. I love these little scenes that you're writing that are little pieces of a person's life. Very good.

Posted 10 Years Ago

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