Away From You- Best Way To Love You

For some reasons, I can feel what he feels. Every time he feel pain, it hurts my heart; everytime he feels happiness, I feel joy. It should be good, to feel what your lover feel, but I don't want it. Not a single bit of feeling what he feels.

Is not that Shaq isn't a good a cool guy, is because, I can't love him. I can't love him cause I love him, I can't ruin his life, I can't do anything that will hurt him, I can't.

Every time I kiss him, every time I care about him, I knew, I knew I am wrong. I knew I am wrong, I might be hurting him and...... Just not him.

I can die for Shaq, I can do anything for him. I believe he can do anything for me too, but I need to go, without a doubt. Now everything is this world stopped, I have left, I didn't leave a message, a letter, any last words, just gone.

My heart was a mess, I can feel it, I can't control my heartbeats and it was killing me, I knew he meant too much for me, that's why my heart hurts when I went away, every time I can't see him, my heart hurts.

I know I can't leave him, but the best way to love him is to leave......

Author's Note

What do you think? I don't know if I do good, please tell me.
Ignore grammer for this one please, I am still working on it.

Reviews

[Alicia™]

It's lovely, and wonderfully written, but I think that even though it's just a short scene, you need to elaborate on why she needs to leave.

[Coyote Poetry]

A strong poem of emotion. Emotion can lead us to paradise or hell. I like the desire of love and a feel of wanting to escape. Love can twist people up. But love keep us alive and gives us hope. A excellent poem.
Coyote

[Cynthia]

It's all make up, :D

[Jami Nicole]

It's sad, but at the same time it's kind of happy. Or, at least that's what I felt. Love is a powerful and mysterious thing and maybe it might just be working a miracle with your characters.

Is this about you or is it completely made up? Either way, major kudos. It's great, really.

~Love, Jami~

[Linear]

Only if the man or woman is married or in love with another can I understand why it's better to leave, yes powerful writing, well done

[Marie Harrison]

Wow, this was a very powerful writing. Sounds like two people who are too tightly emeshed. Your losing yourselves when you're with one another. Too much of a good thing. Very moving and sad as well!

[AloysiaVerben]

Awwww! It cute and sad! I like it alot. I love the way that she loves him so much that she will leave. Awww! Did I say that already? Oh well I'm gonna say it again AWWWW! :)
The only thing I was wondering though was how Shaq was pronounced?