Fake

Fake

A Poem by Cynthia

What if my life is just a waste of time? Just wasting time......


It seems I have no real friends, its just fake. Fake smile ; fake laugh; fake secrets; fake handshakes......

There is nothing I can tell them, they just laugh and bully me, and with no encouraging. I don't mean they should play fair, but I don't want to be hurt ever again, not even once.

© 2011 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
its not as poetic as I think it'll be, cause its nothing I can explain, and I am feeling so hurt whenever I look back, and I just wanna to cry so much!
I don't know should I write more so you really know whats going on, but just... whatever.

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I loved this.
It's so touching.
If you feel like talking to someone, I'm here, just message me :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


Love it!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Let me first say that I like this, it speaks to a lot of people, like me. I was bullied too. And I would just like to say that leave those guys behind, you'll find really friends, and belive me, real friends don't do that. If you want to talk to some just message me, I'll be glad to listen, or offer help if you need it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I also think this is one of your best works!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really sad. I was bully before, but then one day, I just had this epiphany that I can't put up with this anymore and that I'm better then this and if people hate me, screw them! I need to stand up for myself.
It's hard to do, but once you do, it's life-changing.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Really heart warming poem.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I'm afraid life is about pain and grief, but it's also about love and joy, as we grow we learn so keep on

Posted 9 Years Ago


I think you should write your heart out. If something is bothering you, you can talk to me or to anyone here, or if you don't want to talk, put it in a poem but don't let it fester.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes everything feels fake and you feel like life is passing you by. Hopefully things will get better.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometime we feel like life is a dead-end. Sometime good to change directions and find new friends and goals. Hurt can't be escape from. We need to balance some good into life too. A very strong story in the short poem. A excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 9 Years Ago



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