Lead Me

Lead Me

A Poem by Cynthia

I didn't use to think of death,
but you bought me there,
I was facing death,
alone... cause you weren't here,
I couldn't see your face,
fill with confident and proud,
I couldn't gain strength,
without you there.

I didn't use to think of death,
but you bought me there,
and then you were gone,
left me hopeless,
but I couldn't blame you,
you had your own business,
I was weak and fragile,
only if I am lost,
without you there.

Please do come back,
I didn't know how,
was I going to stop breaking,
how was I supposed,
not to break,
without you there.

Would you tell me where you were?
Just give me some strength,
to lead me far far away,
from the darkness...

© 2011 Cynthia


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Cynthia
Something I think of, without a reason...

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ooo.. i really like this. I can feel the pain through the words here..
yeah..its hard when that person we need the most in our life isn't there to support us. But we seek strength either way. The longness for someone is very well shown. Great poem!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Dark yet hopeful poem, good job, Thank you for sharing. Good write and great read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


So heartbreaking.

Posted 8 Years Ago


loved it ,,, very nice write ... great !

Posted 8 Years Ago


Great job! Keep up the good work:)

Posted 8 Years Ago


i liked this it had a lot of emotion great job :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Heart-felt, expressing painful feelings for a person stuck in a dark place, one should always pick up the broken pieces and move on, even if those who we need the most weren't there for us, there has been a yearning who is clearly felt for that special someone, well-done

Posted 8 Years Ago


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this poem could be taken several ways. which is why i love this poem. it can be related to on so many levels in so many different situations. versatile i think is the word im looking for lol. i loved it

Posted 8 Years Ago


I really liked this. I could feel the pain in the words. Really great job.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Great write, thoughts to ponder!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Heartfelt, flows with emotions! Nice!!

Posted 8 Years Ago


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