Did I?

Did I?

A Poem by Cynthia
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Did I ever tell you
how much you hurt me?
When I put every efforts
of mine on you,
then you suddenly broke it?

Not just the care
I once felt about you,
but my heat.

The little fragile heart,
which is easily broke,
then now you are,
breaking in without a glance,
no with a doubt.

Did I ever tell you?

© 2011 Cynthia


Author's Note

Cynthia
I really forgot how to write poems after more than a month...

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this is awsome poetry, reely powerful words

Posted 9 Years Ago


Sometimes, we need to say it loudly or indeed scream at the world that we are hurt like this! Powerful words hon, deep and powerful xx

Posted 11 Years Ago


Good write...!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Everyone forgets, but always remebered

Posted 11 Years Ago


great emotion in this poem, keep it up :)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Awww... so heart-breaking this poem seems to show.. i still enjoy reading your poems!! =D

Posted 11 Years Ago


Nice!

Posted 11 Years Ago


You must really have it stuck in your brain 'cause it is exacly the style I remember. Excellent!

Writing keeps the dream alive
~Roxi~

Posted 11 Years Ago


I'm sorry I'm just really not in the mood for sad poems. However, the quality is really good and it's well structured. I would have enjoyed it more at a better time...maybe I'll read it again later....Thanks for sharing.


Posted 11 Years Ago



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