Did I?

Did I ever tell you
how much you hurt me?
When I put every efforts
of mine on you,
then you suddenly broke it?

Not just the care
I once felt about you,
but my heat.

The little fragile heart,
which is easily broke,
then now you are,
breaking in without a glance,
no with a doubt.

Did I ever tell you?

Author's Note

I really forgot how to write poems after more than a month...

Reviews

[KATHY SUE SILLS]

Excellent write with emotional feelings, well done.

[Calypso]

Sad. It seems at times that you're run over and no one cares.

[Julie Beth]

you must be horrible at forgetting because this is great keep it up :)

[Fontane Wong]

Welcome back, Cynthia! Your poems are still fantastic although you haven't write poems for more than a month. I must admit it, it seems that you have just leave this writing site for only a day! This writing, I think it's kind of heartbroken. It feels pain. Sometimes, seperate, would be the best way for a lover. Moreover, I like the ending of this poem. This is a excellent piece. I adore it!

[KAREN]

You didn't forget, this was written really well!! Very heartfelt!! Welcome back!!

[Coyote Poetry]

I have met old lover later. Never a good discussion. Sometime best to separate and allow the pain to fade away. I like this poem. It would be nice to ask a old lover what happen? Sort of a lesson could learn. Maybe? I like the ending to a excellent poem.
Coyote

[A]

You get back to the writing mood faster than you think don't worry about it :)
and about your poem time heals everything, that's just of life's laws... We all wish to confront those who broke our hearts and hurt us badly, we all wish that they realize the pain they caused, but most of the time we prefer silence and hope for time to take care of what is left unbroken inside of us.

[My Fair Lady]

I like this Cynthia.. sometimes it is easy to let those little things we don't say just nag and build into some seriously deep scars.. I like this.

[Miss Sally Sunshine]

It's good. Shortish, and to the point, with a bit of imagery thrown in. Good job :)