The End

 herThe Beggining. The End

 

It was the begining of something great The End.

When we Started Ended I was happy Dead, I had felt nothing but love and hope. Pain and Sorrow.

 

I loved hated spending my days with her in cutting my arms, and nothing would ever everything would hurt me while I was with her.

 

Her beautiful eyes were like a drug and I became addicted to the beauty they held, But in the near future I would feel there warmful embrace had an overdose and felt dead and full of pain.

 

I needed to see get away from her she had made all the cheerfulness and love enter leave my body and go somewhere else...

 

It Had Just Began. Ended.

Reviews

[Lilmissfit]

I love this poem its very beautiful in a sad way and the layout it awsome :)

[Wandering Violet]

This is a fascinating piece, with your unusual use of strike through very effective. Two stories within one - the before and after. Clever! Well done.

[LynLee]

I loved the format of this!!!!!!!!!! it was brilliant!!!!!!!!!!!

[ForTheWorld]

at first I'm curious how to read it, but at last I got it, it's a wonderful story yet so sad, i felt the pain, it's 'cool' sorry to say that, but i enjoy reading this one, i love it =D

[Intern'l Shultzfeather]

Watched this one with enjoyment, creativity sparkles.

[Sarah>_>]

I absolutely love how when you read only the crossed out word, its a happy poem, but when you read the underlined words, it's depressing. You MUST write more like this, you have a serious talent.

[Sarah>_>]

Holy s**t, this is AMZING, Donovan! One of my favorite poems on this website.