Life and Death

Life and Death

A Poem by Donovan

My emotions fueled all of this, sorry if there is errors

She awoke me, from my pain, she made me smile, laugh, and fill with pure bliss.

She was amazing, and then we "went out" it was one of the most amazing things to happen in my life. She was my everything and I would have gladly given her my life.

Then came the downfall. 

He came into our lives, she fell for him immediately, I could tell right away.

Late every night I prayed we would stay together with a tear drop ending my prayer.

Then she told me, I liked she was honest but confirming it was true put me in tears.

We would have stayed together for a few weeks after this, full of suffering, but I tried to remain hopeful.

She said I was acting strange, for me the reason was obvious and just saddened me more because when she said it I felt like it was my fault...

We broke, which is just how my heart, mind, body, and soul felt afterwords, broke.

Not long after that she was with him, which put me in the moment I feel dead but with the help of some of my amazing friends I will get better.

© 2011 Donovan

Author's Note

If you guys ever read this I want to thank MT, Darb, J, Nica, and Karma. I love you guys so very much.

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very emotional, heartwrenching, yet so beautiful. i feel it.

Posted 8 Years Ago

This actually breaks my heart.
Wonderfully written though.
Keep pushing forward.


Posted 8 Years Ago

This was an amazing poem with great emotion. Well written

Posted 8 Years Ago

it was sad but expressed such emotion that was great... beautiful poem

Posted 8 Years Ago

This is beautiful!

Posted 8 Years Ago

I love you Donovan.
And I'm glad you wrote this.

Posted 8 Years Ago

So sad, but well written. Nice work!

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Added on August 30, 2011
Last Updated on August 30, 2011
Tags: poem, sad, forgotten, alone, dumped



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