Legacy

Legacy

A Book by Jak Flyer
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In a future where the United States is divided into three warring fractions, a special ops soldier from the East Coast searches for the answers to his father's disappearance.

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© 2012 Jak Flyer


Author's Note

Jak Flyer
This is my first story so expect tons and tons of grammar ans spelling mistakes. I have ideas swirling around in my head so the task of writing one down is reward enough.I will try to edit my work but expect the worst.

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Hey man, how's it goin? I just read a bit of your story and I want to say I like the premise and seems like a cool background. However, that being said, the formatting is not reader friendly haha! Without paragraph breaks and breaks in the dialogue, it becomes a bit of a chore to read and takes away from it. I will check out more later on, and keep an eye out for my first chapter I should have it uploaded by the end of the week.


-Maksim

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Hey man, how's it goin? I just read a bit of your story and I want to say I like the premise and seems like a cool background. However, that being said, the formatting is not reader friendly haha! Without paragraph breaks and breaks in the dialogue, it becomes a bit of a chore to read and takes away from it. I will check out more later on, and keep an eye out for my first chapter I should have it uploaded by the end of the week.


-Maksim

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 1, 2011
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Tags: Military, Future, War, Sons, Action, Adventure

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