Everytime I look at you

Everytime I look at you

A Poem by Lord Da Crownsmeyer
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A poem about moments in life where everything you have is your own mirror.

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Everytime I do look at you,
You do look back at me;
Behind silent ice you stand
Just to stare sometime at me.
And if I try to follow you,
You vanish like a rainbow.
Leaving my heart in sorrow...
Sometimes I say I must forget
And you I shouldn't get,
For in every thing I draw or
Write, it's you I write about.
It makes the world's honor
to me, when you say or shout:

"I want to stand in your line
Never in life your love decline.
The love I always felt for you
Was pure and much more true,
Than all the countless screams!"

If I run, inside my dreams,
It's you I wanna hurry to.
Finally I'm there all alone
With no friend to talk to.

Never again make that mistake,
And confess to your own clone!

© 2010 Lord Da Crownsmeyer


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Thank u Dom!!! ur sweet and lovely :D:D:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


I liked this piece a lot. My fave line:

"I want to stand in your line
Never in life your love decline.

this is really good. Congrats!

Posted 13 Years Ago


Thank you Corey...:D:D:D

Posted 13 Years Ago


So true, and wierdly, many people are not comfortable with what they see. Well written with some great wisdom that I think many can identify with. Nice job on this.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Lord Da Crownsmeyer
Lord Da Crownsmeyer

Beirut, Ashrafieh, Lebanon



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Challenged by the beauty of autumn red leafs, the music of the river water in the spring, the sun dance on my skin on summer time, and the white coat of the eternal snow on winter mountains... more..

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