Right Now

When that feeling just wont quit

Sometimes I wish you would die

Scratch that,

Everyday I wish you would die

But rather,

Everyday I wish I would kill you

Instead,

Everyday I want to end you

Preferably,

Right now I want to end you

More likely,

Right now I want to kill you

Hopefully,

I want to kill you

Basically,

I want to murder you

In other words,

I will be the one to end your life.....

Reviews

[Chris]

Full blown "Bad Boy Syndrome". I've seen this - way too often. And the mate returns and returns ...and returns. So many relationships have the "I can change them into what I desire!" and the anger grows on both sides until what attracted is lost and the pain and damage is complete.

[Richard🖌]

Well, Riley 🥀
(nice new pen name)

Ohhh-YES! Sometimes, the angst is so overbearing ya just gotta!
And, there's nothing better to lose that buildup of bitter vexation than spilling it over into poetic verse to get it out of your craw and sate the need to do the dirty deed vicariously … almost, as good as the real thing, eh?
Coming away with a sense of satisfaction with a smile on your face is sooo cathartic; ain't poetry wonderfully fulfilling? 😈
Annnd, you've said it all in a neat presentation that's so easy to read and understand … shame on the unsuspecting numb-nut who double-crossed and done you wrong.

Love your voice in this one, Poetess … what a way to let it go! ⁓ Richard🖌

[terry smith]

great writing Kie!! that is how a lot of people feel but don't have the guts to express it that way!