Waking Up

Waking Up

A Poem by Eboy
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This poem is a pretty simple poem, trying to describe what it feels like having your girl being a tad different from what you dream of.

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I am always dreaming of 
pretty eyes.
I am always dreaming of
soft, flowing hair.
I am always dreaming of
the way she would always smile.
I am always dreaming of
a hand that fits mine.

Then, Thursday came along.

She gained an image.

I opened my eyes
and I see Hazel eyes 
looking endearingly to me, telling me
things that only my eyes can understand.
I opened my eyes
and I see curly hair 
that smells like 
paradise and perfume and breakfast.
I opened my eyes
and I see a smile
that make my heart 
skip a beat, take a beating 
and ever beat so harder.
I opened my eyes
and I see a hand
that is smaller than mine
but can handle my entire being.
All my faults and imperfections.

There may be differences
between you and my dream girl.
But heck.

You now are the girl of my dreams.

© 2011 Eboy


Author's Note

Eboy
...and then the dream is over. HAHAHA. The sequel to come soon.

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hmmm, if I'm honest, it's clichéd (sorry, you will discover I like to be completely honest when I review - I wish everyone here was honest with me!) BUT, I LOVE that line: "paradise and perfume and breakfast" when your describing the smell of hair. That is pure beautiful poetry right there, especially as you finish off the ethereal feel of paradise with breakfast...excellent! :D that line alone made this poem worth the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


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This is great! Haha you get an A++++ :D

Posted 8 Years Ago


hmmm, if I'm honest, it's clichéd (sorry, you will discover I like to be completely honest when I review - I wish everyone here was honest with me!) BUT, I LOVE that line: "paradise and perfume and breakfast" when your describing the smell of hair. That is pure beautiful poetry right there, especially as you finish off the ethereal feel of paradise with breakfast...excellent! :D that line alone made this poem worth the read.

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on March 4, 2011
Last Updated on March 9, 2011
Tags: dream, waking up, love, hands, eyes, hair, smile

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Eboy
Eboy

General Trias, Cavite, Philippines



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