Ungrateful Ants

Ungrateful Ants

A Poem by da_great
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I gave an advice to them!

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They queue as if as practiced
Hurrying, pacing as they pleased
Carrying a load twice
Each of their size
But all I saw are little Hercules.

I observed them as if as I am seer
And saw them as they bumped to each other
Whispered them in surmise
And put sticks as their device
But why they stung me as their answer.

© 2020 da_great


Author's Note

da_great
Ants really are really hot-headed creatures!

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you've also got to watch the uncles
They can be even more of a problem
sometimes

Posted 3 Years Ago


Don't underestimate the power of ants!

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

da_great

3 Years Ago

Haha they will yell at you silently

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Added on August 7, 2020
Last Updated on August 7, 2020
Tags: tease, limerick, playful

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da_great
da_great

Mandaue, 7, Philippines



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A front-end developer who loves to pause when something/someone suddenly inspires me to think about writing a poem. more..

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