thin poison

different from what i usually do just felt different today so i tried something new felt like rhyming so i did

Words are like poison

they seem very thin

but just like poison 

they cut us deep within

so we hemorrhage

coughing up blood

over the opinions of others

the ways they drag us through the mud

but just like poison there usually is a cure

an antidotes of sorts

it may be toxic 

or maybe benign

but all wounds will heal 

it may just take time.

Author's Note

5 min writing exercise felt like being lighthearted for some reason. you will only see this if you look for it or are subscribed

Reviews

[Nemophilist Meraki]

Awww. It's so hopeful!!! I love it. :)

The rhyming is interesting too. I like the abnormality to it. How it's not a steady pattern and makes the reader actually make the effort to put it together. You require us to focus on what you're saying and how you're saying it.

I also, as always, love the descriptive powers you portray in all of your poetry. How you so beautifully pain a picture for the reader to see instead of giving vague words and ideas to try to explain the emotions.

Great job! .meraki.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you for your kind words it is kind of hard for me to respond to compliments but i appreciated them all the same. I am glad that you enjoy it thank you for your comments and insight.