A Wisdom Of Passing

A Wisdom Of Passing

A Poem by TheAimlessWanderer
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i really hope you guys like the meaning behind this ones just as i do i worked extra hard on this one trying to apply all the tips that i have been given to the best of my ability hope you enjoy it !

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faded words gleam brightly in new eyes

as new ones rarely shine in stone

but in eyes of aged crystal, light permeates beyond the surface
 
for disciplines are not learnt, or taught 

they are felt 
 
a self resonating call,

an individual truth,

a reasoning,
 
and a feeling of passing felt through the ages and beyond.

it is inconceivable
 
a malleable freedom and constraint.

the etched path is worn and deeply ingrained 
 
and obstacles are but sand underfoot

for through the changes

life  is evershifting.
 
and though worn and weary

life can be given anew

becoming a  stream 

and a pool.

to be born

and its reflection shines brightly 

on the new era,

a wisdom of passing.

and so new eyes are born,

permeating with light,

casting a gleaming reflection

on the streams and pools

and so the path etched in the stone road has become sand

shifting and worn


undefinable but true... 

© 2016 TheAimlessWanderer


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Chris, this poem is a beautifully and fully defined paean to life's journey. A life journey that we all must undertake. Age and wisdom are the rewards in the end, Death but the final step of the voyage. This is without doubt a very good poem. Good write.
Ted

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much ted i am so glad you feel that way about it. This would not have been possible for.. read more
Ted Kniffen

3 Years Ago

You're welcome, Chris. Keep writing.



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Very well written and expressed. Keep writing!:)

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

Thanks luna glad you enjoyed it (:
You portray life's journey very eloquently.
It is what it is, a journey.
From the start to the end, where no one know the final outcome.

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you very much glad that you liked it !
A deeply insightful and strong depiction of life's journey and the inter-twined truth of age and wisdom portrayed skillfully through your poetry. Excellent write-up. Looking forward to more of your brilliant work :)

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much daisy that really made me feel good reading that. I will keep writing away and hop.. read more
Daisy

3 Years Ago

No matter how much we learn there's always more out there and that's what makes you an outstanding w.. read more
Chris, this poem is a beautifully and fully defined paean to life's journey. A life journey that we all must undertake. Age and wisdom are the rewards in the end, Death but the final step of the voyage. This is without doubt a very good poem. Good write.
Ted

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Thank you so much ted i am so glad you feel that way about it. This would not have been possible for.. read more
Ted Kniffen

3 Years Ago

You're welcome, Chris. Keep writing.
Great thoughts and wisdom shared in this poem.
"a wisdom of passing.
and so new eyes are born,
permeating with light,"
A wise person learn from yesterday and try to do better today. The poem is positive and allowed the reader to ponder many things. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

I am glad it made you ponder and i am so happy you enjoyed it
thank you for your insight on .. read more
Coyote Poetry

3 Years Ago

You are welcome.
Man you f*****g nailed this one


Posted 3 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Ookpik

3 Years Ago

1010 don't know why the rating came out less
TheAimlessWanderer

3 Years Ago

Wow (: thank you so much so glad you enjoyed it !!

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