Let it all cry out

let it all burst out let the music flow 

 the one that resonates with my soul 

overflowing

 let it all cry out melodious and proud

whether it is harmonious for all but me does not matter

 for in this sea where all dreams scatter

we shatter our beliefs for the lightness to lift us off our feet

 a moment oh so fleeting 

 a moment of wanting and needless needing

it haunts us through our daily lives

it makes us wear a disguise

 why can't we live free ?

 why can't we see past the threads of these guises ?

 so we chain ourselves to others beliefs

just for the lightness to lift ourselves off our feet 

just for this moment

 we let our words become chains linking hearts in bondage

 an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood

a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe

 a symbiotic truth 

 a unification in lies

and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil ??

 is my face really hidden with all this self derision 

or am i just making a decision to mask my mask

and hide from a lie i know to be true

 

  and not live through the pain to just see it through...

Chris

Reviews

[Tori Jones]

"Is my face really hidden with all this self derision
Or am I just making a decision to mask my mask
And hide from a lie I know to be true
And not live through the pain to just see it through..."

There's a lot of truth and meaning in this poem, great write!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

sorry for the late reply been dealing with life thank you so much so glad you enjoyed it i thoroughly enjoyed writing this one glad i could convey a sense of meaning to you (:

[Tori Jones]

It's fine...

[The Exiled Wolf]

we let our words become chains linking hearts in bondage
an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood
a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe
a symbiotic truth
a unification in lies
and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil ??

These are my favorite lines in this piece
Imagery and emotional
Words are also carefully crafted
I love your writing style!

[TheAimlessWanderer]

Thank you so much The exiled wolf i am so glad you enjoyed it and could feel me in it (:

[costa siwale]

an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood
a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe
a symbiotic truth
a unification in lie

wow, you really dug deep with this one
and that's what poetry is all about, words that evoke emotion.
I truly like this piece, added to my library.
well written, keep at it.

[TheAimlessWanderer]

i am so glad it evoked emotion in you that means a job well done for me as the deepness of it all my poems are philosophical and or are almost entirely composed of figurative language they are just things that rattle me deeply inside that need expression so glad that you enjoyed it
costa siwale (:

[costa siwale]

i did, believe me. you welcome me friend

[hi]

mash a mash? wow now that would be deep and confusing, hummm i think iam starting to understand your writing style, i love it, and keep writing

[TheAimlessWanderer]

even i am confused by that but thank you so much i think that is a compliment i don't really have a defined style never learned how to write it was just always something i did in my head always had some rhythm something i needed to get out always a flood never a damn that is my minds unwanted/wanted innate principle i will keep writing and improving until i can be truly free of these conflictions within.

[Ookpik]

and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil

blew me away man

[TheAimlessWanderer]

wow thank you so much that is inspired from a conversation i had with nemophilist meraki on my poem mirror of denial (: i love that line too so glad you liked it.