Let it all cry out

Let it all cry out

A Poem by TheAimlessWanderer

let it all burst out let the music flow 

 the one that resonates with my soul 

overflowing

 let it all cry out melodious and proud

whether it is harmonious for all but me does not matter

 for in this sea where all dreams scatter

we shatter our beliefs for the lightness to lift us off our feet

 a moment oh so fleeting 

 a moment of wanting and needless needing

it haunts us through our daily lives

it makes us wear a disguise

 why can't we live free ?

 why can't we see past the threads of these guises ?

 so we chain ourselves to others beliefs

just for the lightness to lift ourselves off our feet 

just for this moment

 we let our words become chains linking hearts in bondage

 an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood

a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe

 a symbiotic truth 

 a unification in lies

and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil ??

 is my face really hidden with all this self derision 

or am i just making a decision to mask my mask

and hide from a lie i know to be true
 
  and not live through the pain to just see it through...
Chris

© 2016 TheAimlessWanderer


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"Is my face really hidden with all this self derision
Or am I just making a decision to mask my mask
And hide from a lie I know to be true
And not live through the pain to just see it through..."

There's a lot of truth and meaning in this poem, great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

sorry for the late reply been dealing with life thank you so much so glad you enjoyed it i thoroughl.. read more
Tori Jones

2 Years Ago

It's fine...



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"Is my face really hidden with all this self derision
Or am I just making a decision to mask my mask
And hide from a lie I know to be true
And not live through the pain to just see it through..."

There's a lot of truth and meaning in this poem, great write!

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

sorry for the late reply been dealing with life thank you so much so glad you enjoyed it i thoroughl.. read more
Tori Jones

2 Years Ago

It's fine...
we let our words become chains linking hearts in bondage
an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood
a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe
a symbiotic truth
a unification in lies
and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil ??

These are my favorite lines in this piece
Imagery and emotional
Words are also carefully crafted
I love your writing style!


Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

Thank you so much The exiled wolf i am so glad you enjoyed it and could feel me in it (:
an interconnectedness in pain and falsehood
a surface oh so thin stretching across the universe
a symbiotic truth
a unification in lie

wow, you really dug deep with this one
and that's what poetry is all about, words that evoke emotion.
I truly like this piece, added to my library.
well written, keep at it.

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

i am so glad it evoked emotion in you that means a job well done for me as the deepness of it all my.. read more
costa siwale

2 Years Ago

i did, believe me. you welcome me friend
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mash a mash? wow now that would be deep and confusing, hummm i think iam starting to understand your writing style, i love it, and keep writing

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

even i am confused by that but thank you so much i think that is a compliment i don't really have a .. read more
and all disguises now seem true for if everyone is hiding is there really a veil

blew me away man

Posted 2 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

TheAimlessWanderer

2 Years Ago

wow thank you so much that is inspired from a conversation i had with nemophilist meraki on my poem .. read more

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TheAimlessWanderer
TheAimlessWanderer

British Columbia, Canada



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