Butterfly

Butterfly

A Poem by Daisy123

Ah, to be a butterfly

To soar through the summer sky

As if there is not a worry

In all the world

As if summer will last forever

And the trees no longer change

To move with grace and beauty

And never worry about tomorrow

If only we all could live like this

And coast through life

With the wind under our wings

© 2010 Daisy123


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Vibrant and fragile the butterfly. You write wistfully the beauty of this creature.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Very nice poem. I like this

Posted 12 Years Ago


We all wish be like butterflies...This is a very beauitful poem, very nice written. I like it ^___^

Posted 14 Years Ago


Oh, if only life could really be like this poem of yours. Beautiful.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This was a really lovely write! I loved the imagery in this piece, and the ethereal, almost dream like atmosphere that you created. The message underlying your poem really made me think, and I kind of found myself agreeing and being able to relate to what you were trying to say. I liked this a lot. :)
~PaperHearts

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very peaceful piece... I dig.

Posted 14 Years Ago


Very beautiful with a sense of longing, it seems it would be a nice existence, with no worries and no cares.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I really like butterflies and this poem. It is a sweet and lovely piece. I read it several times to savor it, again and again!

Posted 14 Years Ago


this poem is sweet and vivid when i read it i imagined thousands of buutterflies

Posted 14 Years Ago


I find myself thinking the same thing all the time... So I try my best to do just that, to live like a butterfly. A well-written poem, I've really come to like your style after reading a few of your poems. The bit about summer lasting forever really touched me, I've had quite a few good memories from summer, as I'm sure we all have at some point.. Rambling aside, solid idea, great imagery, love the style.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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