Who is the Imposter?

TOVLI - 10 WORD CONTEST - (40 WORDS TOTAL) BARREL, ROLL, CROSS, CLOAKED,FOGGY,STARS,VENTS,DAM,FREEDOM,FRIENDS

CLOAKED FRIENDS, all hypocrites

preaching FREEDOM

VENTS with no outlets

they BARREL through

the FOGGY terrain of their minds

they see STARS

I see a DAM ready to burst

I see a heavy CROSS

ROLL out the red carpet

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Honest and direct words in the poem. More hypocrites than people who shall stand for anything. Perfect ending for the amazing poetry. I enjoyed this one.
Coyote

[Hebe]

Thanks John..... seems like we have an abundance of these characters around these days;)

[Coyote Poetry]

You are right my friend and you are welcome. Honest men in Washington. Few and rare.

[Akshatha Kamath]

Beautifully written! Loved it!

[Hebe]

Thank you Akshatha...your comments are appreciated :)

[Zephyr]

Short & sweet poem, Hebe...
Your works impress me always...:)

[Hebe]

Appreciate your review :)

[Zephyr]

My pleasure..

[Pete]

pretty clever & creative using the words Hebe. very telling. tongue and cheek ending. weighed down by the masks we wear. so hard to tell who is who behind masks. nice job. you do so well with these word challenges!

[Hebe]

Hi Pete... thank you, keeps the ol'noodle working :)

[Pete]

i hear ya'. i do word puzzles to keep the cobwebs away!

[angelina neves]

uau... impressive!
Fantastic way you use the words.

[Hebe]

Thank you Angelina appreciate your review.