splitpersonality

splitpersonality

A Poem by Donovan "Grey Wolf" Goodnight
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I know I am crazy but I'm not really crazy.

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I feel two people inside me

I'm sure I'm not crazy

But their is a section between the two people

Sometimes I am me and some times I cange

Somehow I feel different people

One the Hatefull darkness

The other kind and loving

But I have caged the love

Threw That part of Me away

So Now I'm jut Hatefull and lost in Darkness

Taro won

© 2009 Donovan "Grey Wolf" Goodnight


Author's Note

 Donovan "Grey Wolf" Goodnight
do you know what I'm talking about?

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Oh, yes. I certainly understand. I just felt a third come alive in me yesterday. I've always been wary of putting such feelings into words, because I've been threatened with a mental hospital before. I'm crazy, but I'm not, so I don't want to be trapped in a mental institute. Ya know? o__O;

Posted 13 Years Ago


I can understand it perfectly... I like how its worded it has a very nice flow...

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AMAZING ONCE AGAIN!!!!!! KEEP IT UP

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

cool poem. I think you're writing what lots of people feel that are just too afraid to admit it. encluding me but i have no problem admitting it...i feel sometimes like my body is controled by someone else. I know what you mean....check your spelling though.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yea i know what you're talking about, I have seven people in me or maybe they're just masks . Also you spelled change wrong twice, but other then that great job.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on June 29, 2009

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 Donovan "Grey Wolf" Goodnight
Donovan "Grey Wolf" Goodnight

Allentown , PA



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Like anime and manga. I like to write because it helps me escape the world and create my own. I have been writing since I was 9. I have been spending less and less time writing in the last year or so .. more..

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