BEAUTIFICATION

BEAUTIFICATION

A Poem by dakarai
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"Possessing qualities that give great pleasure or satisfaction to see, hear, or think about.

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Become creative, so you can create
Excellence at the expense of pleasure,
Appreciating the ratings measured
Up to satisfaction without debate.
Transcend your trade, finding ways to restate
Imagination, without the pressure.
Find the kind of mind that can be treasured,
Inventing art to which others relate.
Complete a concrete image that attracts
Attention for all of the right reasons,
Trusting that your art will not be attacked.
Instigators can not create lesions
On creative hearts, which remains a fact,
Now, noticed not to change with the seasons.

© 2014 dakarai


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dakarai
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I like this piece. To me its a piece thats saying be you, be creative the way you want to be without the pressure of what other people think.

"Imagination, without the pressure.
Find the kind of mind that can be treasured,
Inventing art to which others relate."

I really like these lines. Nice work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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very nicely penned I love this.


The name caught my eye BEAUTIFICATION I really like that.


Beautiful thank you for sharing this wonderful piece.

Blessings. kindred poet

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I love this!

Makes me want to create a lot!

Thank you for posting this. (:

Posted 5 Years Ago


I think this piece gives off a good message.
You've certainly wrote this well. Good job, again.

Posted 5 Years Ago


I like this piece. To me its a piece thats saying be you, be creative the way you want to be without the pressure of what other people think.

"Imagination, without the pressure.
Find the kind of mind that can be treasured,
Inventing art to which others relate."

I really like these lines. Nice work!

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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