STAY ENCOURAGED

STAY ENCOURAGED

A Poem by dakarai
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Acrostic-Italian Sonnet

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Somehow, you managed to make it this far,
Triumphantly traveling from a past
Amassed with road blocks, that caused you to cast
Your cares where their reach was beyond the stars.
Even though each step kept a painful scar
Near to your dear heart, your fear did not last.
Courage compassed your mast across a vast
Ocean, propelling you to where you are.
Unleash your belief! Let your fight take flight,
Rising to the challenges that you face.
Ascend! As your will bends towards new heights,
Gaze up, without compromising your space.
Enable your spirit to see the light's
Day, in a way that will reveal God's grace.

© 2014 dakarai


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Loving it! Although I had to figure out the pace :) I would add 1-2 more lines at the end to make it more rhythmic.

Posted 5 Years Ago



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Added on July 16, 2014
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dakarai
dakarai

Atlanta, GA



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