BUILD YOUR DREAM

Italian Sonnet

If homeless, would you use your skill to build
The best nest for someone else? Be my guest!
Be different, or be like all the rest
Of those, who chose to let their dreams get killed.

You have the foundation of a strong willed
Individual, possessed with the zest
For life, ability to pass the test,
Chest full of heart, and a survivor's guild.

Build your dream with the tools under your belt!
Bet on your future and win with a new
House of cards, in the hand you have been dealt.
When said and done, no matter what you do,
Your self satisfaction has to be felt.
If not now, then when? If not you, then who?

Author's Note

Honest opinions please!

Reviews

[Edward Lancheister]

good provoking poem but many inelegant words, maybe use to be a rhyme
tools under your belt ? its weird
how about this ?

toward your dream upon ability that gifted
straight forward to the vision that been set
stop dreaming for fantasy
its time to achieve the reality