History Won't Repeat

History Won't Repeat

A Poem by Dallisa <3

The things I used to think of you

were always nice and sweet

Did you honestly believe

I wanted history to repeat

The family that you made 

beat out the one you had

Why should I care

whether you are feeling sad?

It's been quite a while

since I've heard from you at all

You didn't even bother

to pick up the phone and call

I think about your son

and how adorable he must be

An amazing little boy

that I regrettably can not see....

© 2009 Dallisa <3


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From the boldness in each descriptive word, I assume that this past experience has happened to you? Heartbreak is always devastating. Though I would break up the poem lines a few, nice rhyming and rhythm and flow. This is a good poem, but I expect better to come from you. [:

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Dallisa <3

Long Beach, CA



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Hey..I'm Dallisa. I'm really bad at the whole describing myself thing so if you want to know something about me just message me. Love to write and read other peoples stuff so keep the read requ.. more..

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