Honesty

Honesty

A Poem by Dana Ferguson

Clean and safe,
it releases the haze.
Lifting your heart,
it begins a new start.
Happy without a scratch,
binds no longer attached.
Without it is unhappiness,
constricted,
sick,
and mad.
Release the disease,
you may displease.
No matter who is listening,
your sanity craves a Christening.
Speak now and you'll see,
or forever lose your peace.

© 2015 Dana Ferguson


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Your poem blooms with truth and you painted a great imagery. Thanks for sharing.

~Rob~

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

I find that the truth whether painful or happy makes some of the best poems. Thank you for your kind.. read more
Bohrium Guy

5 Years Ago

Most welcome.
Honesty is the best policy and is the first chapter in the book of wisdom. Thanks for sharing,,enjoyed.
maria


Posted 5 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

Thanks for stopping by :)
maria  ( rose)

5 Years Ago

you're welcome:)
To free the self with honesty is real freedom. I especially enjoyed- "Lifting your heart it begins a new start. Happy without a scratch, binds no longer attached." Good poerty! Thank you for sharing

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

Thank you! And thanks for stopping by :)
"Lifting your heart,
it begins a new start.
Happy without a scratch,
binds no longer attached." - One of my favorite parts of this excellent poem! Awesome work here, Dana! This is very true-honesty is way better than carrying your guilt. Thank you for sharing this.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

Thank you for such a kind review, I'm glad you enjoyed it :) Personally I believe honesty is the bes.. read more
Kreative Kana

5 Years Ago

You're very welcome!
Superb. Love what you've done with this, the release of all those things we hold on to, clogging up our mind and thought processes. Release the disease, you may displease, but you certainly will feel that release. Love the last line.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

Thank you :) I recently had to do this myself, and I feel some of the best things to write about are.. read more
alifeacoustic

5 Years Ago

You're welcome. I always feel writing something not only helps you focus and clarify matters for you.. read more
Dana Ferguson

5 Years Ago

Very true, I completely agree with you. :)

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Dana Ferguson
Dana Ferguson

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