What I Want In A Man

What I want in a man,

is a tender loving sigh.

For him to sing to me,

and never say goodbye.

I want to give and he as well, 

and never have to take.

His words to never burn red,

and he'd kiss me when I wake.

I want to hear him say my name,

and have my heart know love.

And on the day we're laid to rest,

have sunshine fall from above.

Reviews

[Woody]

what if I told you that man exists? I"m.. I mean he's everything you say and more. I've.. I mean he's been waiting for the right girl to come along.
that was an attempt to make you smile. this is such a sweet poem. your wishes are so simple, yet so profound.
I sincerely hope you find this pearl soon enough :)

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you so much, you definitely brightened my day :) I hope we all find our pearls :) Thank you for taking the time to read it.

[Philip Muls]

Very modest and honest in your wishes. Very innocent and authentic in your wording.

Well done.

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you :)

[alifeacoustic]

Beautiful. I don't think it is too much to ask for a contented sigh of appreciation and just being with that person making you feel that there will always be obstacles, but you will overcome them together. Beautifully whispered thoughts.

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

So romantic even I wish a girl like this for me lol...
I respect your thoughts, love has to be like that " Everything we share & nothing we lose" in love ❤

[Dana Ferguson]

Thank you for your kind words :)

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome friend :)

[Chris]

Sweet thoughts to give consideration too...

[Dana Ferguson]

I like to think so :) Thank you so much for stopping by :)