Dandelions

Dandelions

A Poem by Dana Alsamsam

Stretch renewed

Arms, recalling the wishes

That sent them to their

Final flight,

Then their death, and now

They rise, glorious,

Golden phoenixes

From the ashes

Of winters graveyard.

And all we can do

Is hope

That they recall

The wish we made

Three seasons and a week

Ago. Like awaking,

Hazy, from an ethereal

Dream.

© 2013 Dana Alsamsam


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Lovely write, i'd read a few days ago a stuff that was on the same topic but this topic and this write is very good and interesting to read as compared to that one. yeah, that one couldbe a nice one but at an extent, your this write is very good and very memorable type.
Then their death, and now
They rise, glorious, Golden phoenixes
From the ashes Of winters graveyard, lovely and very powerful stanza, your words're too very powerful and each word shows his own depth towards "DANDELION", if we do compare ourself with dandelion then the same thing'd be happen with us that happens with a dandelion somehow. very deep and interesting writing. you too keep writing and carry on with your nice and great stuffs :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dana Alsamsam

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading and for your kind words! i think we're all a bit like a dandelion :)



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Lovely write, i'd read a few days ago a stuff that was on the same topic but this topic and this write is very good and interesting to read as compared to that one. yeah, that one couldbe a nice one but at an extent, your this write is very good and very memorable type.
Then their death, and now
They rise, glorious, Golden phoenixes
From the ashes Of winters graveyard, lovely and very powerful stanza, your words're too very powerful and each word shows his own depth towards "DANDELION", if we do compare ourself with dandelion then the same thing'd be happen with us that happens with a dandelion somehow. very deep and interesting writing. you too keep writing and carry on with your nice and great stuffs :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dana Alsamsam

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading and for your kind words! i think we're all a bit like a dandelion :)
we are often like the dandelions...winters of our lives can make us cold and retreating into depression...but we awaken to spring...and rise from the ashes to feel life again.

so nicely expressed here.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dana Alsamsam

7 Years Ago

what's interesting is i actually wrote this literally! about dandelions! but now that you say that.... read more
jacob erin-cilberto

7 Years Ago

oh how i agree with you, Dana.

i sometimes learn what i was actually thinking about whe.. read more
Lovely write

Posted 7 Years Ago


Dana Alsamsam

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading!
zainul

7 Years Ago

You are always welcome.
Your style of writing is quite breathtaking and eloquent at the same time. Keep up the Great work. :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dana Alsamsam

7 Years Ago

thank you so much for reading!

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Tags: spring, dandelions, nature, observation, happy, weather, sun, dream

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Dana Alsamsam
Dana Alsamsam

Chicago, IL



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"my brain hums with scraps of poetry and madness." i dance, write and play violin. i'm studying english and training in dance in chicago. i like spooky things, red lipstick, caffeine, punk/indi.. more..

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