Dandelions

Stretch renewed

Arms, recalling the wishes

That sent them to their

Final flight,

Then their death, and now

They rise, glorious,

Golden phoenixes

From the ashes

Of winters graveyard.

And all we can do

Is hope

That they recall

The wish we made

Three seasons and a week

Ago. Like awaking,

Hazy, from an ethereal

Dream.

Reviews

[Rahul]

Lovely write, i'd read a few days ago a stuff that was on the same topic but this topic and this write is very good and interesting to read as compared to that one. yeah, that one couldbe a nice one but at an extent, your this write is very good and very memorable type.
Then their death, and now
They rise, glorious, Golden phoenixes
From the ashes Of winters graveyard, lovely and very powerful stanza, your words're too very powerful and each word shows his own depth towards "DANDELION", if we do compare ourself with dandelion then the same thing'd be happen with us that happens with a dandelion somehow. very deep and interesting writing. you too keep writing and carry on with your nice and great stuffs :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

thank you so much for reading and for your kind words! i think we're all a bit like a dandelion :)

[jacob erin-cilberto]

we are often like the dandelions...winters of our lives can make us cold and retreating into depression...but we awaken to spring...and rise from the ashes to feel life again.

so nicely expressed here.

[Dana Alsamsam]

what's interesting is i actually wrote this literally! about dandelions! but now that you say that...i may have subconsciously written this about myself as well.

intriguing things happen when poets read each other's poetry!

[jacob erin-cilberto]

oh how i agree with you, Dana.

i sometimes learn what i was actually thinking about when writing certain pieces, based on the comments. other poets teach me.

[zainul]

Lovely write

[Dana Alsamsam]

thank you so much for reading!

[zainul]

You are always welcome.

[B-poet]

Your style of writing is quite breathtaking and eloquent at the same time. Keep up the Great work. :)

[Dana Alsamsam]

thank you so much for reading!