no matter what

no matter what

A Poem by chris' girlfriend
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For Chris Torres

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No matter what happens,

i will always be there for you

even if we eventually go our seperate ways,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you start to treat me like im nothing,

i will always be there for you

even if one day you become deathly ill,

i will always be there for you

if one day you find someone new...

I will still be there for you

© 2008 chris' girlfriend


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A very nice affirmation of love. I like the way you repeated the key point, that you will be there no matter what.
My only criticism is the lack of capitalization. I is a personal pronoun and should be capitalized.
All in all, a nice piece. Keep up the good work.

Posted 16 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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