Marijuana

Marijuana

A Poem by chris' girlfriend

Having so many problems on my mind

happiness is just something I can not find

I grab ahold of a razor blade

so my life will soonly fade

I think deeply for a moment and relize I dont want to die

there is only one more thing that I can try

I take out my pipe and fill it with weed

to be calm is something I need

I take a single hit and begin to feel better

my body feeling light as a feather

I want more, I take a hit, and fill my lungs with the smoke

i know that in my life there is hope

 

 

 

© 2008 chris' girlfriend


Author's Note

chris' girlfriend
smoking marijuana has made me a better persons and now i dont cut anymore :)

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I can sorta relate to your feelings, smoking myself. But I know well enough that marijuana only makes it seem that your life is better, and it's really false reality. I'm glad that you don't cut anymore, and i hope you continue on this track. But from one smoker to another, you're living in a false reality.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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as long as it helps you and makes you happy it should be legal!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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aww dude i love it! its the best poem ever yo!! yea fill the pipe with weed!!!

Posted 11 Years Ago


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Great Poem. Now I'm not saying that I do or that I don't, but lets just say I know what you mean. I'm a happy person. ; )

Posted 11 Years Ago


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did you notice the link above your notes...."quit smoking help"....frickin' hilarious. A word of caution, though......if you don't ever stop you may not accomplish much....I've seen people grow old and go nowhere. So, (now I feel like I'm your mother, lol) don't over-do it. A crutch is a crutch is a crutch...and the truth is sometimes we need them. Use it as you must. Hopefully, one day you'll find a better one....or better yet....learn to walk without crutches. If you do....let me know!! lol Much love~

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

your right bunni that poem is so true about marijuana

Posted 11 Years Ago


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you know what's funny....in HS our mantra was With Dope there's Hope. Of course, that's back when dope meant pot not heroin. Anyhoo.... in California they actually prescribe marijuana for depression. I'm on anti depressants cuz I really wanted to give up smoking .... just to stay on the right side of the law...seen too many people struggling once they're "in the system". But you know what? No anti depressant comes close to the relief pot gives. I'm not an advocate for drug use...actually gave it up for 16 years....but I swear if I didn't start smoking again when I did I NEVER would have made it through perhaps what was my hardest year alive. So....I completely relate and enjoyed this view. Yes.....while it may hurt your lungs, at least you're keeping your skin intact. That's important...need to keep the germs out!! By the way.... just walking in nature is an awesome anti-depressant alone, if you can find a good thick woods somewhere. : )

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I love it... I think its my fav of urs sooo good.... great write:D

Posted 11 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.

Hahaha. I love this. =D You feel absolutely nothing...but the next day...you think about what you've done [if you can remember] and you just sorta laugh about it. Good writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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i love this s**t thats how i feel!! like all the way.. expet a Messenger doesnt want me to do drugs.. :(

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

depressing for mwa... I do like it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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