Marijuana

Marijuana

A Poem by chris' girlfriend

Having so many problems on my mind

happiness is just something I can not find

I grab ahold of a razor blade

so my life will soonly fade

I think deeply for a moment and relize I dont want to die

there is only one more thing that I can try

I take out my pipe and fill it with weed

to be calm is something I need

I take a single hit and begin to feel better

my body feeling light as a feather

I want more, I take a hit, and fill my lungs with the smoke

i know that in my life there is hope

 

 

 

© 2008 chris' girlfriend


Author's Note

chris' girlfriend
smoking marijuana has made me a better persons and now i dont cut anymore :)

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I can sorta relate to your feelings, smoking myself. But I know well enough that marijuana only makes it seem that your life is better, and it's really false reality. I'm glad that you don't cut anymore, and i hope you continue on this track. But from one smoker to another, you're living in a false reality.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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I can sorta relate to your feelings, smoking myself. But I know well enough that marijuana only makes it seem that your life is better, and it's really false reality. I'm glad that you don't cut anymore, and i hope you continue on this track. But from one smoker to another, you're living in a false reality.

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

"fether" is not feather, dear...
Very nice though I really liked it... it makes lots of sence... I have felt that way before too...

Posted 11 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Wow..imagine what you could accomplish without any drugs! Good rhyme, check the spelling on 'fether' should be 'feather' .. keep writing.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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