Life of a Teen

Life of a Teen

A Poem by Lauren!!

Life of a teen is fun, but sometimes it isn't all it's cut out to be.


 Exclusive is the word

thats all they really are

rich, conceited, exclusive girls

they ruin those who aren't

and make those who are

they are like a rose

beautiful, absolutely beautiful

but there are always thorns

Rivalry is the word

sibling, sports, and friends

parents like one more

and leave you standing alone

hypocritical, unaware, parents and friends

it's the life of a teen


© 2009 Lauren!!

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great poem,I really liked it however you should consider changing the color yellow to another color or a different shade of yellow it's hard to see,but overall great poem.Congratulations!

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Added on April 9, 2009



Chico, CA

I am not the oldest writer out there, but I still love it. I am in my early teens, but I would still love it of you gave me some feedback on my uncompleted manuscript. The book that I am writing i.. more..