Warp

Warp

A Book by StarNinja
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A young boy wakes up and finds himself on an alien world. Oh s**t.

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© 2014 StarNinja


Author's Note

StarNinja
I give you the new and improved 80's Fantasy Project, now with a new working title! I did some heavy rewriting. Basically the whole thing went through a rigourous editing process but its not over yet. Now I need your help to gloss it up and make it the bestest book ever! Keep in mind this is still in rough draft form and subject to change at any and all times.

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I really enjoy the concept of this one and there are several directions you can take it. In contrast to Cosmic Warriors, which although visually appealing I found to be a bit dry and more on the generic sci-fi side, this story is far more original. The characters are more interesting and the descriptive parts flow better rather than being a forced distraction from the action. I didn't mean for that rhyme. Whatever. If done right, this could be a excellent mix of humor, action, wonder, and...I don't know, other stuff. You might even think about disecting Cosmic Warriors and putting the best parts into this story. Like mages on giant lizards. That's cool. I think Phillip would like that. You could give him some kid-sized magic armor. Eh? Just don't have any crazy sex scenes or use the f-word and you could probably work this into a decent selling young adult book.

Posted 9 Years Ago



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