Snowflakes

Sometimes, you must fall to find yourself in the crowd...

Each flake has its own mistakes. Each flake is a different face. Each flake has a different view. Each flake is different, like me and you. Each flake can like, each flake can love. Each flake can blind, each flake can fall. Each flake is different, like me and you. Each flake has a different view. Each flake... Each and every person is a snow flake in the wind. All are different, but some look the same. We love in pairs, we fall in groups. It doesn't take much to be in the loop. Looped in by a hook- Promises made with a look. Clique formed, snow ball formed- Your packed tight. No way to fight- The "in crowd". A person is a person. A flake is a flake. Each flake is a person, Who makes a mistake. Each flake...

Author's Note

This has been altered after reading some advice and taking it. Take 2.

Reviews

[Dr. Wood ?]

interesting, comparing people with snowflakes..I do think that this could be better, but you are not far off, in my humble opinion. I am not sure about the line it doesn't take much to be in the loop..It seems you put it there just because it rhymed....Not bad though

[Danielle Nicole]

Thank you for the constructive criticism. I agree the line is slightly random but I had it, yes, because it rhymes, but also because of the idea of being in a clique or circle- how people sometimes find it easy to become apart of a herd. But, if I have to explain that, then I need to change the line or expound on it. Thank you once again!