Right here, right now.

A poem to god...

They say, you love me,
That you love everybody.
That you wont let the agoni
Take the best of me.

They tell me of wonders,
You did but i don't want wonders
I just want your love,
If you give the orders,
Then show some love.

Your words of hope
All just a rope
To hang my hope
From the neck.

Show some love, right here
Right now, chase away the fear,
From the moments to come,
And the one dying right now.
When will your kingdom come?
When will you say "I'm done"
Letting hate
Open the gate.

Do you really love everyone?
I wont wait untill tomorrow
I want it right here and now.
Do you even care?
Another dying flare
Yes, i still dare
To ask questions
As long as i see reflections
Of your words in the actions,
Of your unkept promises.

Show us some love,
Right here and right now.
I refuse to bow
Before a king,
Who hates everything
In my life's string.

Author's Note

I hope you like it.

Reviews

[A writer]

It is so... I have no words Danny. I just love it. Though, I have to add, that God loves everyone, including you, even if it doesn't look like that. But if you don't believe that God loves you, believe me, I love you.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[A writer]

You're welcome :)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

it is Awesome.........
hell yeah..........we need so answers......right here right now..........waited too long.....
great write.......
i loved it!!!
:)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you:) means a lot that you like it.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

you are welcome..........!!! :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Anyways...you believe in god?

[Pushkar Prabhat]

not in the usual way..........i believe in the natural force that makes everything beyond the 10th dimention

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Oh. I see. Well, my view is more of an agnostic, than of unquestioned faith in god. Anyways, thank you.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

i am there with you..............i have a ton of questions!!! glad to meet you!!! :) :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, questions we all have. The real question is, do we dare to ask? and will we accept the answer, IF there ever will be an answer.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

well we must dare to ask and also try to answer some through science..........i would not settle for someone else answers.......

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, the tricky coexistance of religions and science keeps us in great suspense. Both of them have really well based thoughts, and attempted explanations... But, none of those will take us any closer to the answer we seek, so we must break down these walls that were built by previous generations, and we have to start rebuilding from the ground up. And we must ask all the questions from the start.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

when i say science..........i mean science............not the one taught and made to gulp down............the walls have been broken my friend..............and new foundations have been laid............but there is no sure way of knowing if this one is the right one..........maybe we will never know..........but also we might!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, even if its not the right one, then atleast, the next generations will know, and maybe they'll head in a whole new direction. But if it is the right way, then we should find signs on the road, telling us whether or not we're on the right track. Anyways, if we aim to keep it simple, then i guess the answer for everyone is whatever they/we are most comfortable with. But thats another suspense...even if it works for us, that doesn't necessarly mean that its true...or false. (please, excuse my bad english)

[Pushkar Prabhat]

exactly............maybe there is no single truth........single answer...........single reality............and just maybe there is none..............it is only what suits us best............that is the beauty of it all................
your english is fine.........

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yes, it is possible. Think about it...we are trying to come up with a definition for god's existance... And as history has shown many times, our simple minds could not be able to know for sure. Since, god is the creator, now, that is if god exists in any form, then for us to try and figure out how god "works" would be like a computer trying to understand the human creating it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I don't know for sure... I mean, I've read many books on the subject. From many authors, and i can say this, at first, i thought them to be interesting...but then i stopped reading those books, out of two reasons: 1. I find them to be rather useless when i try to make up my own theories... 2. Its really weird for a fifteen year old to read theories about god, the creation of the world, life and its purpose... And so i stopped, and returned to thinking about it all for myself.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

see here is a basic diff i don't seek proof of existence of god..........i seek the truth behind existence of everything.......... if it turned out to be god......i'd say hello....... if not.......well i will know the truth then.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

nothing wrong with your age.........i highly suggest quantum physics........

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Well, if you find the truth of existance, you'll find the truth about god's existance too, because if there is a god, then all existance is closely related to him/her/it

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Quantum physics... Hmmm...well I'll think about that.

[Pushkar Prabhat]

exactly........just the diff of approach.......
i have to go now.......would love to discus more.......

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Maybe tomorrow...

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I wrote this to god last night... Hoping he reads it.