Crying

.......crying as i write this........

Do you remember?
No, it was not september.
You were standing at my door,
I nearly fell to the floor.
Your presence made me happy,
Without you its all crappy.
You came, because i asked you to.
Time stopped for us back then,
No it just seemed like that.
That moment,
That beautiful moment.
Ugh...on it went.
For a few seconds it lasted,
Our happiest few seconds.
Now its all wasted.
Now i'm just terminated.
Dead i am on the inside,
You were life inside...
Inside my now shattered heart,
A destroyed soul i am.
I know you feel the same,
Its the world's shame.
You were my light,
I was your fire,
You were my life,
I was your love,
You were my reason,
I was your season.
Now, you are gone,
So am i.
I torn my poems to pieces,
Because you were the meaning,
You were the reason,
You were the light,
You were everything to me.
And now you're gone.
Now, i have pain.
That sweet memory,
Of our melody.
That very first kiss,
The feel of your lips.
Now its all pain.
I still cherish the moments...
Yes, every one of them.
They're my hidden gold,
You are my hold...
My hold on life.
Without you, my soul is a desert.
Everything is dead.
On the inside i am dead.
Why?!

© 2016 Dani The Unreviewed

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A writer

This one is so sad, but also beautiful. I'm feeling the emotions in this one. Gosh... I wish I could write as awesome as you can.

Posted 8 Years Ago

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Cool Girl

i know that feeling.. You feel like you're stuck in a never ending black whole.. Nice poem though

Posted 8 Years Ago

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8 Years Ago

Thank you sis.

8 Years Ago

Welcome bro!

Perkele.7885

Two much time is spent on moments that people spend together. Some time should be spent on the hours spent building something together and not the few moments spent tearing it all down.