Love you till death

Deeply personal...will extend it...

When i first saw you...
My heart skipped a beat.
Someone turned up the heat.
Stomache went upside down,
Mind would drown,
Everytime i think of you.
Love you till death,
Will love you to death,
If you desire that.
The first kiss,
The feel of your lips...
My mind
flips.
Everytime you held me tight,
Evil gave up the fight.
Your smile was my light.
Love you till death,
I will love you to death,
If you desire that.
That one night,
When outside was no light,
I looked in your eyes,
And seen passion.
My jeans got tight,
Where to hide?
Nowhere...can't fight.
Then we kissed,
Was so nervous, i nearly missed.
I will love you till death,
I will love you to death,
If you desire that.

Once again, your eyes...
Those infinite blue eyes,
Got me mesmerized.
Your blonde hair,
Was like a flare...
In the dark.
I will love you till death,
I will love you to death,
If you desire that.

Your beauty struck as lightning,
Darkness stopped fighting.
I love everything about you,
You helped me live,
You did so much for me,
And i did so little for you.
I will love you till death,
Love you to death,
If you desire that.

Author's Note

Before anyone starts getting ideas...nothing like that happened between us. We just kissed.

Reviews

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Wow! You wanna kill someone with love, sing this to him! He will happily follow your wish!
Romantic and sensual!
Emotive and mesmerizing!
Awesome work, dear Danny!
Love is an ocean to dwell.. You will never know when it started and where it will take you but that won't stop you from going deeper!
Loved the rhythm! You pulled this off, really really well!
Kudos smarty!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Creator]

Jesus! I think this poem is a really powerful, demonstration of your love, and devotion towards your boyfriend. Your talent, and courage to post such personal poems is simply gorgeous. You are my favorite poet from now on. Thank you for sharing, and keep writing. :) (I'm off to sleep now, done reviewing for tonight, be back tomorrow) Take care Danny.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) and Okay, i'm soon off to sleep myself... Good night.

[Creator]

Good night. :) And you are welcome :)

[AaronFreitas]

Somebody's falling head over heels haha... awesome write I love the detail and hard work you put into this piece :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you my friend.

[Destiny Dreamer]

WOW Beautiful, romantic. Loved it!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thanks for reading.

[Cool Girl]

This is sad.. I'm glad you're writing about it though. It kind of reminds me of my old friend named Chanse.. He moved away. I still remember his blond hair and blue eyes. I could never forget them..

I enjoyed reading this piece. It was very well written.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you sis:) means a lot to me.

[Cool Girl]

You're always welcome :)

[closed]

well written

although sad
for reasons we can both relate to



-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, we can. Thank you.