Where is the word?

Where is the word?

A Chapter by Dani The Unreviewed
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So where is the word,
That can stop the world,
That can say what I feel inside?
A simple, short, honest word?

I'd love it, if we could speak,
Open, honest words,
And not seek
Old, infinitely repeated works,
Of evil, painful words,
That act like sharp, bloody swords.

So where is the word?
That can say what I feel inside,
That can put the truth into sight?
So where is the word?
A simple, short, and honest word...


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Author's Note

Dani The Unreviewed
But really... Anyone know the word i'm lookin for?

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Im really going back a bit here but when I read this I remembered 'Dune' where the warriors all had their own word/sound as a weapon. (I think?)
If it doesnt exist - make it up, I say. You would be in good company I.M.

A deep and intriguing write. :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Lol. That is interesting. Btw... Who is it?
ANTO

8 Years Ago

Lethal Bizzle - British rap star - he coins new words all the time.
https://www.youtube.com/w.. read more
Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

I'll check it out :)



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This is a excellent piece very thought provoking. ..I like the flow....well done :)

Posted 8 Years Ago


Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :)
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Lovely IM
All good writers ask that vary question
walking around the room
with Sinatra playing in the background

A very deep write
i can see much light in your work

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Dani The Unreviewed

8 Years Ago

Thank you :) It means so much to me that you like it:)

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