Letter to my love *part one*

A fraction of an email I've sent to my love

Good morning my dear. I hope your family treats you well, and that you can handle the pain of being apart. I'm hoping for a lot, yet I know that most of these hopes, and wishes are pointless. Well, not exactly pointless, rather incapable to help your situation, because I can't be with you. I wish I could heal your broken heart, to give you all the love you missed, to fill in the gaps, to help you out of this pain. I wish I could see you one more time...what am I saying? I wish we could be together, forever, in love, forever young, hot headed teens, without having to grow up, so we could live the wonders of this world in their most beautiful moments, in their maximum beauty. I wish our hearts could be close enough so they can tell each other how fast to beat. I miss the long hours, that now seem to be shorter than the shortest moments in life, the beautiful moments, that we wish to always live in. I miss your sweet kisses, I miss your smiles, I miss your ever so bright, blue eyes, I miss your warming presence, I miss the essence of love, and joy in life... I miss you, I miss your ever so playful self, the ever so beautiful soul, that is always innocent, always so full of life. I miss you my dearest. But I love you more. Every day, every hour, every minute, every second we spent together I loved you more and more. The fire never died, it only kept growing. Even now, I love you with all my being. I wish you all the joy, and all the love my heart could, can, and always will give to you. Allow me to end my lines with my never dying love, blessings and best wishes.

Danny.

Author's Note

Unfortunately... He could not respond. Maybe i will post the rest of the email... Maybe not... We'll see. Thanks for reading

Reviews

[closed]

sometimes the best way to cope with a traumatic scenario is to do something like this

writing a letter to ourselves (or so to speak in this case) can be a great release of pent up/negative emotion

this was really heartfelt

even though there hasn't been a response to this letter to him yet

i hope it freed you of some of your pain IM...


sincerely

-Dream

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thawl you :)

[Celie Rose]

Hello Danny. I like your story. Expressing your emotions can be a comfort when you are hurting. Am sorry you got no response. Keep your head high and continue being you. Well written. Keep writing.

[McBear]

I think this is very beautiful and romantic, my friend. Very smooth and well written. Such a pleasure to read (: Thanks for sharing

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you :) thought of sharing something nice for a change :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

You are so romantic!
Beautiful, heartfelt piece, Danny.
There are many lines that could be turned into a new poem.
Words throb!
Amazing!
Hope you got your response, equally lovingly!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea, i got my response months ago ..lol. thank you :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Good to know. Equally romantic reply ha? :p

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea, until he cheated on me...to avoid confusion, this was written for my ex. while we were still together.

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Oh well. Okay.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

yea it is. I'm over it. :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Happy to know that. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks :) you're so nice :)

about to post a poem for Thanksgiving. so watch your newsfeed. :) it's written for friends. :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Just posted it :)

[Jyoti_Ablaze]

Cool. I will! :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you :)

[Bex Bries]

I really enjoyed reading this. It is captivating reading from a first person perspective into the life of a relationship. I love how fondly you spoke of this person.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

thank you very much :)

[Jesse Pruett]

So if there is a second half, why did you not post it? This is good stuff, was the other stuff not as good in your mind?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Nope... That one is way tooooo personal. So yeah, that one's not gonna get published... Atleast, not today. (And i accidentally deleted it from my clipboard...lol)

[Max]

Ah, the things we do, and write when we're in love... It is simply amazing, how sincere, and beautiful this piece is. I beg of you, post the second half of this. I'm eager to read it.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you. :) and i'm sorry...i wont post it, cuz i deleted it from my clipboard. Anyway, thanks again.

[Max]

Oh... But... Nevermind... You are always welcome. :)

[Destiny Dreamer]

OH GOD ... It made me cry. It is the most Loveliest email I've ever read. U have a great sense of playing with words. I love the way U have described Ur love for ur loved one! I wish U two meet and be together FOREVER and let the rest of the world see the love U people share, it might melt their heart!
Thanks for sharing it!

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you so much :)

[Blessing In Disguise]

Beautifully written n well expressed i simply loved it :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you :)

[Shah Sabia]

Woaah too good.
"I wish our hearts could be close enough so that they can tell each other how fast to beat". I found this cute :')
It is soul touching.

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thank you very much :) :)

[Shah Sabia]

Always welcome.
Stay blessed :)
Did he respond by the way ?

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, he called. But he did not see the email... Long story. Point is he called :)

[Shah Sabia]

Cheers for the call, i wish he could read this.
Anyways it was truly a pleasure reading this, i hope i can listen to the long story someday :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Yeah, in twelve days he is going to read it, cuz he will be back with me. :) and sure, i'll tell you the story :)

[Shah Sabia]

Just 12 says, not an issue then.
I'll wait for these days to get over soon.
May you guys stay together forever.
And yeah, i'll be waiting for the story ;)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Okay. Thanks :)

[wordman]

well a beautiful letter no doubt,maybe he will reply

[Dani The Unreviewed]

I did hope so for a long time...and he did call yesterday :)

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Thanks for reading.

[wordman]

you`re welcome and i`m glad